This is absolutely astounding as an animator, i'd cry if tasked with doing this.
This is absolutely astounding as an animator, i'd cry if tasked with doing this.
I waited 2 minutes for something to happen and in the end it was rather anticlimactic. Maybe plan out a more interesting story or plot. What you lacked in story you made up for in animation however.
if i were to be one of those assholes on the internet using witty comebacks such as “i don’t see you doing any better” then i wouldn’t thank you for the lovely advice and constructive criticism <3
seriously i actually take advice from this kind of criticism (maybe the one star was a bit too much for pointing out one flaw but you get the idea)
As much time as you have put into every frame of this animation, the fact that they are flying by so fast that I can't even follow the story is a shame. Do yourself a favor and slow it down a bit so we can appreciate the time you put into this and better follow what is happening.
sure. i'll try and do my best. thanks! :)
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Age 39, Male
artist/animator
Game Design
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Joined on 4/24/18